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The anger enters in her mind, hatred blinds her. She cannot figure out why she is so upset. No one has done a thing to her, yet still she shouts and screams. Is she not right? Is she insane? Has she lost all control? Come inside and be afraid, of this impressive mess I've made. Oh yeah, have you ever lost your mind? Have you ever lost control? Have you ever felt like you were drowning? Have you ever felt like you were being buried alive by your own mind? A heavy burden weighs down upon you, wicked thoughts go flittering through. Can't hold on to a single one, each more wicked than the next. If only people knew, what went on inside of you; if they did you would be locked away. Never again to see the light of day.

Have you gone insane? Or have you succumbed to genius? There is a line between the two, but it seems you've ripped that line. Broken it, erased it, destroyed it. A psychotic mind with a high IQ, within a capable body is most dangerous. Difficult to catch, difficult to question. It becomes just a game to you. How many people will play your game? How many people will lose? Will you win every time, now that you've crossed the line? Will you ever be caught, will you ever stop?

Don't know what to do for you. If I helped you hide the bodies I would be arrested too. I cannot keep my mouth shut much longer, yet still you continue on. I tell you stop; you hit me and keep on going. Am I the only one you will never kill? Will you not stop until everyone is gone? Do you want it to be just the two of us? We can run away, fly away. To a distant island, live out our days there.
©2009 ~HouseMDfan
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Author's Comments

This is something I wrote today in English class for a pre-write assignment. I enjoyed it, so I thought you would like to read it. I know it stops abruptly at the end, but the teacher called time, so I stopped. ^-^

Note: "Is she not right, is she insane" comes from "The Game" by Disturbed. "Come inside and be afraid, of this impressive mess I've made" comes from "Perfect Insanity" by Disturbed. The assignment was to write whatever popped into your head, and these lyrics came to mind, so I wrote them.

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:iconzioxyshelton:
I like it. You're probably going to get looked at like you're crazy for writing it tho, babe. But, I love your use of 'Disturbed' lyrics, however subconssciously. The last three sentences sound, by far, the best however. I wish that could be you and I. -sighs- Love you, shug.

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:butterfly: :frail: Zioxy Shelton :frail: :butterfly:
:iconhousemdfan:
Nahhh. I'm in a criminal justice class and I just finished a psychology course last quarter lol.

I love you too babe. I dunno why those three sentences popped in there, but I'm glad they did.

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You're welcome for the watch/fave. ^_^
"Everybody Lies."
Gotta Love Wolvie and Dr. House.
:iconrenegadepineapple:
Nice one! Do I sense some Disturbed lyrics in the beginning? XD

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Don't ASSUME...
you'll make an ASS out of U and ME!
:iconhousemdfan:
Yes, yes you do. lol

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You're welcome for the watch/fave. ^_^
"Everybody Lies."
Gotta Love Wolvie and Dr. House.
:iconneverbroken18:
just a window into a mind no one could begin to comprehend makes you wonder how people could think the way they do and in no way does it seem wrong to them.
I suppose some people are a force to be reckoned with. I liked it ^ ^

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I\'m such a tease come chase-- it\'s not like you can catch me
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Thank ya very much!

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You're welcome for the watch/fave. ^_^
"Everybody Lies."
Gotta Love Wolvie and Dr. House.

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